Yet another Thatponyguy Diary: Batshit Crazy Pro

[thatponyguy]

Ty Lovell and Tyson Braeburn, present: Batshit Crazy Pro Wrestling!

So I created my own promotion, BCPW, with a November 2012 data pack. Run in-game by me and a friend.

Roster right before my first event:
Main Event:

Face: Chris Hero, Delta, PAC and Tyler Black
Heel: Chuck Taylor, Delirious, Jon Moxley and Sami Callihan.

Upper Midcard:

Face: Fenix, Frightmare, Hallowicked, Jigsaw, Matt Cross, Scott Parker and Shane Matthews
Heel: Alex Colon, Arik Cannon, BLK Jeez, Josh Daniels, RJ Brewer, Ruckus, Scorpio Sky and TJ Perkins.

Midcard:

Face: ACH, Flip Kendrick, Matt Saigon, Zack Sabre Jr.
Heel: EXesS, Matt Vaughn, Ty Hagen.

Lower Midcard:

Face: Louis Lyndon, Mike Sydal
Heel: CJ Banks, Mark Roudin.

Opener: None.

Jobber: None.

Active Tag Teams:
3.0 (Scott Parker and Shane Matthews) (Face)
AeroForm (Flip Kendrick and Louis Lyndon) (Face)
BLKOUT (Ruckus and BLK Jeez) (Heel)
D.U.F (Arik Cannon and Sami Callihan) (Heel)
Incoherence II (Frightmare and Hallowicked) (Face)

Titles:
BCPW (Vacant, 60 Image)
BCPW Insanity (Vacant, 35 Image)
BCPW Lightweight (Vacant, 40 Image)
BCPW Tag Team (Vacant, 35 Image)

[thatponyguy]

BCPW Adrenaline Rush!

First match: BCPW title tournament semi-final match

Chris Hero vs. Jon Moxley

Winner: Hero cleanly.
Post-match: Jon Moxley attacks Hero.
Rating: ***
[Chris Hero debuted his new gimmick (Cocky), it got a positive response.]

Second match: BCPW title tournament semi-final match

Tyler Black vs. Sami Callihan

Winner: Callihan via Arik Cannon-ference.
Post-match: Two-on-one on Tyler.
Rating: ** ¾

Third match: BCPW title tournament semi-final match

Delta vs. Chuck Taylor

Winner: Chuck Taylor by cheating.
Post-match: Taylor runs for it.
Rating: ** ¾

Fourth match: BCPW title tournament semi-final match

Delirious vs. PAC

Winner: PAC cleanly
Post-match: Delirious attacks PAC
Rating: ** ¾

Fifth match: Tag team Four-Way Dance

AeroForm vs. BLKOUT vs. 3.0 vs. Incoherence (Frightmare and Hallowicked) for the BCPW Tag team championships

Winners: Incoherence
Rating: ** ¾
[Ruckus debuted his new gimmick (Angry Minority), it got a positive response. BLK Jeez debuted his new gimmick (Angry Minority), it got a positive response. The BCPW Tag titles have gained in image.]

Sixth match: Four-Way Dance

Jigsaw vs. Matt Cross vs. Arik Cannon vs. TJ Perkins for the BCPW Lightweight championship

Winner: TJ Perkins by cheating
Rating: ** ¾
[The BCPW Lightweight title has gained in image.]

Seventh match:

10 man battle royal for the BCPW Insanity championship

Winner: Zack Sabre Jr.
Rating: **
[The BCPW Insanity title has gained in image.]

Main Event: Four-Way Dance

Chris Hero vs. Sami Callihan vs. Chuck Taylor vs. PAC for the BCPW championship

Winner: Sami Callihan via interference from Jon Moxley.
Rating: ***
[The BCPW title has gained in image.]

[thatponyguy]

Adrenaline Rush was attended by 574 people!
We made $11480 from ticket sales.

BCPW Trent Acid Memorial Night preview!
Opener: Chris Hero vs. Tyler Black vs. Chuck Taylor vs. Delta for BCPW championship #1 Contendership
Second Match: Incoherence© vs. BLKOUT for the BCPW Tag Team championships
Third match: TJ Perkins© vs. Jigsaw for the BCPW Lightweight championship
Fourth match: The losers of the opener vs. Jon Moxley, Delirious and Arik Cannon whoever gets the pin gets a BCPW title shot at our next show
Fifth match: Zack Sabre Jr. © vs. Ty Hagen for the BCPW Insanity championship
Main Event: Winner of the opener vs. Sami Callihan© for the BCPW championship.

[thatponyguy]

BCPW presents: Trent Acid Memorial Show

Opener: Chris Hero vs. Tyler Black vs. Chuck Taylor vs. Delta for BCPW championship #1 Contendership
Winner: Chris Hero cleanly.
Rating: ***

Second match: Incoherence vs. BLKOUT for the BCPW Tag Team championships
Winners: Incoherence by DQ after interference from Alex Colon.
Post-match: Three-on-two beatdown on Incoherence.
Rating: ***
[The BCPW Tag titles have gained in image.]

Third match: TJ Perkins vs. Jigsaw for the BCPW Lightweight championship
Winner: TJ Perkins by cheating
Post-match: Run-in attack on Perkins by Matt Cross
Rating: *** ¼
[TJ Perkins gained 1 point of overness from this match. The BCPW Lightweight title has gained in image.]

In-ring segment: Slipknot’s Disasterpiece plays over the PA system as JAMES MITCHELL walks out, making his debut. He announces the birth of BCPW’s first ever stable: The Horrific Uprising! Disasterpiece plays again as Jon Moxley, Delirious, Arik Cannon and Sami Callihan make their way to the ring, with Callihan at the front, holding his BCPW championship close. Mitchell announces that these four young men are his new clients. Mitchell and Callihan go out to ringside to watch Moxley, Delirious and Cannon’s match.
[James Mitchell gained 1 point of overness from this segment.]

Fourth match: Tyler Black, Chuck Taylor and Delta vs. The Horrific Uprising (Jon Moxley, Delirious and Arik Cannon) whoever gets the pin gets a BCPW title shot at our next show
Winners: Black, Taylor and Delta (Black gets the pin after failed interference from Jim Mitchell)
Rating: ***

Fifth match: Zack Sabre Jr. vs. Ty Hagen for the BCPW Insanity championship
Winner: Sabre Jr.
Post-match: Sabre offers Hagen a handshake and Hagen spits in his face.
Rating: ** ½
[The BCPW Insanity title has gained in image.]

Backstage segment: Chris Hero hypes his match against Callihan.
[Chris Hero gained 1 point of overness from this segment.]

Main Event: Chris Hero vs. Sami Callihan© for the BCPW championship
Winner: Chris Hero by DQ after interference from Moxley.
Post-match: Tyler Black saves Hero.
Rating: *** ¼
[The BCPW title has gained in image.]



Trent Acid Memorial Night was attended by 278 people!
We made $5560 from ticket sales.


Louis Lyndon suffered an eye injury, he'll be out for 2-4 months.

[thatponyguy]

BCPW Bad Habit card:Opener: The Horrific Uprising (Jon Moxley and Arik Cannon) vs. Incoherence© vs. BLKOUT vs. Chris Hero/Delta for the BCPW Tag Team championships
Second match: Zack Sabre Jr. © vs. Delirious for the BCPW Insanity championship
Third match: Chuck Taylor vs. PAC
Fourth match: TJ Perkins© vs. Matt Cross vs. Jigsaw for the BCPW Lightweight championship
Fifth match: Special showcase four-way dance Petey Williams vs. The Amazing Red vs. Jack Evans vs. Mascara Dorada
Main Event: Tyler Black vs. Sami Callihan© for the BCPW championship

Plus a live performance by Egypt Central!

[thatponyguy]

Batshit Crazy Pro Wrestling presents: Bad Habit!

Dark match: Fenix d. EXesS **

Egypt Central perform their song Ghost Town.

Opener: Four-Way Dance tag team match

The Horrific Uprising (Jon Moxley and Arik Cannon) (W/ James Mitchell) vs. Incoherence© vs. BLKOUT (W/ Alex Colon) vs. Chris Hero and Delta for the BCPW Tag Team championships

Winners and STILL champions: Incoherence.
Rating: ***
Notes: The BCPW Tag titles have gained in image.

Second match:

Zack Sabre Jr. © vs. Delirious for the BCPW Insanity championship.

Winner and STILL champion: Zack Sabre Jr.
Post-match: Delirious attacks Sabre
Rating: *** ½
Notes: Delirious lost 1 point of overness from this match. Zack Sabre Jr. gained 2 points of overness from this match. The BCPW Insanity title has gained in image.

Third match:

Chuck Taylor vs. PAC[/center
Winner: Chuck Taylor by cheating.
Rating: ***

Fourth Match: Three-Way Dance

Jigsaw vs. Matt Cross vs. TJ Perkins© for the BCPW Lightweight championship

Winner: Jigsaw after… Interference from Delirious?
Rating: ***
Notes: The BCPW Lightweight title has gained in image.

In-ring segment: The Horrific Uprising announces that Jigsaw is their newest member. Jigsaw shakes hands with each of them.
Notes: Jigsaw gained 3 points of overness from this segment. Jon Moxley gained 1 point of overness from this segment. Jigsaw's turn was completed, and he is now a heel. Jigsaw gained 4 points of overness from this turn.

Fifth match: Special four-way dance Showcase match

Petey Williams vs. Mascara Dorada vs. The Amazing Red vs. Jack Evans

Winner: Petey Williams after interference from RJ Brewer and Josh Daniels.
Rating: ***

In-Ring segment: Daniels, Brewer and Williams announce that they are now called The Show Stealers, and are BCPW’s newest stable.
Notes: RJ Brewer gained 1 point of overness from this segment.

Main Event:

Tyler Black vs. Sami Callihan© for the BCPW championship

Winner: Sami Callihan following interference from the new Lightweight champ, Jigsaw.
Post-match: The Horrific Uprising beat down Black until PAC, Chris Hero, Matt Cross and Delta save him.
Rating: ***
Notes: The BCPW title has gained in image.

Bad Habit was attended by 319 people!
We made $6380 from ticket sales.


Indi star Mike Quackenbush has announced he will retire from CHI in one month!


Roster~!
Main Event:

Face: Chris Hero, Delta, Jack Evans, , PAC and Tyler Black
Heel: BLK Jeez, Chuck Taylor, Delirious, Jon Moxley, , Petey Williams, Ruckus and Sami Callihan.

Upper Midcard:

Face: , Fenix, Frightmare, Hallowicked, and Matt Cross
Heel: Alex Colon, Arik Cannon, Jigsaw, Josh Daniels, RJ Brewer and TJ Perkins.

Midcard:

Face: and Zack Sabre Jr.
Heel: EXesS and Ty Hagen.

Lower Midcard: None.

Opener: None.
Jobber: None.

Managers: (Heel, manages nobody(Yet)) and James Mitchell (Heel, manages The Horrific Uprising).

[thatponyguy]

Company stats:
Owner(s): Ty and Tyson
Money: $3552420
Size: Regional
Public Image: 22%
Monthly performance: -OOO?
Based In: America (Though, if it were possible it’d be Australia)
Roster Splits: None
Risk Level: 95%
Merchandising: 10%/%200000 p.m.
Production Values: 50%
Advertising: 25%/$250000 p.m.
Developmental Territory: None
Training Camp: None
Sponsors: Arsenic’d to all pay the maximum for my size.


Event schedule:
January: Adrenaline Rush (Large) (I am attempting to make this my Wrestlemania)
February: Trent Acid Memorial Night (Medium)
March: Bad Habit (Medium)
April: Dark Days (Medium)
May: There Will Be Blood (Medium)
June: Show No Remorse (Medium)
July: Chris Benoit Memorial Night (Medium)
August: Nightmare (Medium)
September: Eddie Guerrero Memorial Night (Medium)
October: You Only Live Once (Medium)
November: Go Fucking Nuts (Medium)
December: Christmas Bash (Large)

Worker theme songs:
Alex Colon: How You Like Me Now by Hopsin and SwizZz
Arik Cannon: Disasterpiece by Slipknot
BLK Jeez: See Alex Colon
: Antichrist Superstar by Marilyn Manson
Chris Hero: Follow by Breaking Benjamin
Chuck Taylor: Cigaro by System of a Down
: Psychosocial by Slipknot
Delirious: See Arik Cannon
Delta: Chop Suey by System of a Down
EXesS: None
Fenix: Rock is Dead by Marilyn Manson
Frightmare: Kidnap the Sandy Claws (Cover) by KoRn
Hallowicked: See Frightmare
Jack Evans: Sag My Pants by Hopsin
James Mitchell: See Delirious
Jigsaw: See James Mitchell
Jon Moxley: See Jigsaw
Josh Daniels: Critical Acclaim by Avenged Sevenfold
: You’re Gonna Go Far, Kid by The Offspring
: You’re Gonna Go Far, Kid by The Offspring
Matt Cross: This Fire Burns by Killswitch Engage
PAC: Scream, Aim, Fire by Bullet For My Valentine
: See Jon Moxley
Petey Williams: See Josh Daniels
RJ Brewer: See Petey Williams
Ruckus: See BLK Jeez
Sami Callihan: See Jon Moxley
TJ Perkins: (s)AINT by Marilyn Manson
Ty Hagen: Cold by Static-X
Tyler Black: King for a Day by Pierce the Veil feat. Kellin Quinn
: See RJ Brewer
Zack Sabre Jr.: You Only Live Once by Suicide Silence

Stables Theme Songs:
BLKOUT (Ruckus (Leader), BLK Jeez and Alex Colon): How You Like Me Now by Hopsin and SwizZz
The Horrific Uprising (Sami Callihan (Leader), Jon Moxley, , Jim Mitchell, Delirious, Jigsaw and Arik Cannon): Disasterpiece by Slipknot
The Show Stealers (Petey Williams (Leader), RJ Brewer, Josh Daniels and ) Critical Acclaim by Avenged Sevenfold.



Current Promotional Rankings:
#1: WWE (Global, 100% PI)
#2: Total Nonstop Action Wrestling (Global, 26% PI)
#3: Ring of Honor (National, 17% PI)
#4: CHIKARA (Cult, 50% PI)
#5: Dragon Gate USA/EVOLVE (Cult, 47% PI)
#6: Pro Wrestling Guerrilla (Cult, 25% PI)
#7: New York City Wrestling (Regional, 50% PI)
#8: Batshit Crazy Pro Wrestling (Me) (Regional, 22% PI)
#9: Coastal Zone Combat Wrestling (Small, 34% PI)

[thatponyguy]

BCPW Dark Days Card:
Opener: Jigsaw© vs. Matt Cross vs. TJ Perkins vs. for the BCPW Lightweight championship
Second match: Incoherence© vs. BLKOUT (BLK Jeez and Alex Colon) for the BCPW Tag championships
Third match: The Show Stealers vs. Jack Evans and PAC
Fourth match: Delta vs. (New member of The Horrific Uprising)
Fifth match: Zack Sabre Jr. © vs. Delirious vs. Ruckus vs. Fenix for the BCPW Insanity championship
Sixth match: and vs. The Horrific Uprising (Jon Moxley and Arik Cannon).
Seventh match: vs. Ty Hagen
Main Event: Chris Hero vs. Tyler Black vs. Chuck Taylor vs. Sami Callihan© for the BCPW championship

(Just a note, my entire roster except EXesS are in action on this show)



Batshit Crazy Pro Wrestling presents: Dark Days!


Opener: Jigsaw© vs. Matt Cross vs. TJ Perkins vs. for the BCPW Lightweight championship
The mystery competitor is revealed as the debuting Danny Havoc, who enters to Slipknot’s Psychosocial.
Winner: Jigsaw via Mitchell-ference
Rating:***
Notes: The BCPW Lightweight title has gained in image.

Second match: Incoherence© vs. BLKOUT (BLK Jeez and Alex Colon) for the BCPW Tag championships
Winners: BLKOUT via Ruckus-ference
NEW Tag Team champions: BLKOUT
Post-match: Three-on-two beating on Incoherence
Rating: ** ¾
Notes: The BCPW Tag titles have gained in image.

Third match: The Show Stealers (RJ Brewer and Josh Daniels) vs. Jack Evans and PAC
Winners: The Show Stealers after interference from the debuting Walt Monster
Rating: *** ¼
Notes: RJ Brewer debuted his new gimmick, it got a positive response. Josh Daniels debuted his new gimmick. The fans were confused by the gimmick change of Walt Monster so soon after his last one. (Huh?) Josh Daniels gained 1 point of overness from this match.

Fourth match: Delta vs. (New member of The Horrific Uprising)
The mystery wrestler is the debuting Paul London
Winner: Paul London via Mitchell-ference.
Rating: ***

Fifth match: Zack Sabre Jr. © vs. Delirious vs. Ruckus vs. Fenix for the BCPW Insanity championship
Winner: Delirious via Cannon-ference
NEW BCPW Insanity champions: Delirious!
Rating: ***
Notes: The BCPW Insanity title has gained in image.

Sixth match: vs. Jon Moxley
The mystery wrestler is KENNY OMEGA, who walks to the ring to The Offspring’s You’re Gonna Go Far, Kid.
Winners: Kenny Omega cleanly
Post-match: Jon Moxley attacks Omega
Rating: *** ¼
Notes: Kenny Omega is losing overness because of his weak gimmick.(Fuck)

Seventh match: vs. Ty Hagen vs. Arik Cannon winner gets a BCPW Lightweight championship match at There Will Be Blood
Mystery participant is Chance Prophet, who is played to the ring by Marilyn Manson’s Antichrist Superstar.
Winner: Chance Prophet cleanly
Rating: ** ¼

Main Event: Chris Hero vs. Tyler Black vs. Chuck Taylor vs. Sami Callihan© for the BCPW championship
Winner: Sami Callihan via Moxley-ference
STILL BCPW champion: Sami Callihan
Rating: ***
Notes: The BCPW title has gained in image.

Dark Days was attended by 318 people!
We made $6360 from ticket sales.

WWE Superstar Titus O'Neil has announced he will retire from WWE in one month!

[thatponyguy]

Big new acquisitions for BCPW!
BCPW (Batsh!t Crazy Pro Wrestling) have signed former TNA X-Division champion Shiima Xion and former 2x ROH World Tag Team champion Jimmy Jacobs! They have also Re-signed Shane Matthews and Scott Parker aka 3.0!

BCPW has parted ways with EXesS.

DG-EVO Offered me a job, I was sorely tempted to accept but, alas, I declined.

BCPW There Will Be Blood card:
Opener : Tyler Black and vs. The Horrific Uprising (Moxley and Cannon) vs. Kenny Omega and vs. the returning 3.0 Winners join BLKOUT and Incoherence in the Tag Team championship match, later on in the night
Second match: Chuck Taylor vs. the debuting Shiima Xion
Third match: Paul London vs. PAC
Fourth match: Delirious© vs. Zack Sabre Jr. for the BCPW Insanity championship
Fifth match: Chance Prophet vs. Jigsaw© for the BCPW Lightweight championship
Sixth match: Incoherence vs. BLKOUT© vs. Winner of the opener for the BCPW Tag championship
Seventh match: RJ Brewer vs. Fenix
Main Event: Jack Evans vs. Petey Williams vs. Chris Hero vs. Delta BCPW championship #1 Contenders match.

Hallowicked has suffered a Ripped Bicep and will be out for 7-10 months. Incoherence have been removed from the tag team championship match.

James Mitchell suffered a Knee Injury and will be out 16-20 months. FuckfuckfuckfuckfuckfuckfuckfuckfuckFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK!

[thatponyguy]

BCPW Presents: There Will Be Blood!

Opener :

Tyler Black and vs. The Horrific Uprising (Moxley and Cannon) vs. Kenny Omega and vs. the returning 3.0 Winners vs. BLKOUT in the Tag Team championship match, later tonight

Tyler Black gets on the mic, pre-match and says the following: “I think by now we’ve all realised that the Horrific Uprising aren’t exactly… sane. So, for my partner , I picked someone who can fight crazy with crazy. One of the craziest motherfuckers I know and an expert on crazy-ass factions: My friend, JIMMY JACOBS!” Jacobs enters to Avenged Sevenfold’s Unholy Confessions. Omega reveals that his partner is KOTA IBUSHI! THE GOLDEN LOVERS ARE IN BCPW!Winners: After a great match, the Golden Lovers hit a sweet Golden Shower on Cannon for the win.
Rating: ***
Notes: Jimmy Jacobs debuted his new gimmick (Crazy), it got a positive response. Kenny Omega debuted his new gimmick (Old School Face).

Second match:

Chuck Taylor vs. the debuting Shiima Xion

Xion enters to Skillet’s Awake and Alive.
Winner: After a pretty good match, Xion scores with the From Lust To Dust for the win
Post-match: Xion offers Taylor a handshake, Taylor accepts then decks Xion.
Rating: *** ¼
Notes: Shiima Xion debuted his new gimmick (Fun Babyface), it got a positive response.

Third match:

Paul London vs. PAC

Winner: After a bloody great match, Arik Cannon decks PAC, allowing London to hit a 450 splash for the win.
Post-match: Jack Evans saves PAC
Rating: ****

Fourth match:

Delirious© vs. Zack Sabre Jr. for the BCPW Insanity championship

Winner: After a great back-and-forth between the two talented technical wrestlers, Delirious hits the Shadows Over Hell for a surprisingly clean win
Post-match: Delirious beats Sabre down
Rating: ****
Notes: The BCPW Insanity title has gained in image.

Fifth match:

Jigsaw© vs. Chance Prophet for the BCPW Lightweight championship

Winner: Jigsaw picks up the W after a good match, when Sami Callihan makes his first appearance of the night, interfering to help Jigsaw
Post-match: Danny Havoc saves Prophet
Rating: ** ¾
Notes: The BCPW Lightweight title has gained in image.

Sixth match:

BLKOUT© vs. Golden Lovers for the BCPW Tag championship

Winners: A great tag match that the Golden Lovers win after failed Ruckus-ference allows them to hit a Golden Shower
NEW Tag champions: The Golden Lovers!
Post-match: BLKOUT argue amongst themselves
Rating: *** ¼
Notes: The BCPW Tag titles have gained in image.

Seventh match:

RJ Brewer vs. Fenix

Winner: A squash match that Brewer wins after Josh Daniels helps out
Post-match: Two-on-one beatdown until TJ PERKINS saves Fenix… The hell?!
Rating: ** ½
Notes: TJ Perkins's turn was completed, and he is now a face. TJ Perkins gained 2 points of overness from this turn.

Main Event:

Jack Evans vs. Petey Williams vs. Chris Hero vs. Delta BCPW championship #1 Contenders match

Winner: After a great match, Evans picks up the win after a 630 Senton on Williams
Rating: ***
Notes: Petey Williams debuted his new gimmick (Legit Athlete), it got a positive response.


There Will Be Blood was attended by 339 people!
We made $6780 from ticket sales.

Only a week after making his debut, Shiima Xion has been released by BCPW!
Also released were recently rehired 3.0, Hallowicked of Incoherence, Delta, Fenix, BLK Jeez, Alex Colon and Ty Hagen.

[Michael Hayden vs. The World]

NOT 3.0!!! HOW WILL BCPW FEEL THE FLOW?!

Also, surprised you fired Fenix after having Perkins save him. Though there was a team there.

BLK OUT seems to be done woth 2/3 of the team gone.

Shame about Ty Hagen. Great wrestler.

[thatponyguy]

Jan 7, 2013 1:46:00 GMT -5 Michael Hayden vs. The World said:

NOT 3.0!!! HOW WILL BCPW FEEL THE FLOW?!

Also, surprised you fired Fenix after having Perkins save him. Though there was a team there.

BLK OUT seems to be done woth 2/3 of the team gone.

Shame about Ty Hagen. Great wrestler.

I have this tendency to rehire a lot of guys I fire... Just sayin'...

Nope, Perkins is gonna feud with the Show Stealers for a little while.

Eeyup, BLK OUT are done.

I had nothin' for Ty, unfortunately...

[magiconz]

Not a bad start but a couple of things that came to mind as I was reading.

1. A little more detail couldn't hurt. I'm all for short and sweet results and I'm certainly not expecting a novel but just a little bit more detail than "Wrestler X beat Wrestler Y in this manner". Again, the writing style is completely up to you but it's just something that kind of took me out of it while reading.

2. This is gonna seem like a weird complaint but I kinda feel like you have one too many belts. I'm of the opinion that if you're only running one show a month, you really only need two belts. A World Championship/Top Singles Championship and a Tag Team Championship. If you want to build up a Women's division, a Jr. Heavyweight division, or something of that nature, you can justify having a third belt. For a company that's just starting out and is only running a show a month, four belts is just too much IMO. A company should have a clearly defined mid-card before introducing a title for it.

Again, this is just meant to be some constructive criticism.

[thatponyguy]

Jan 12, 2013 1:50:01 GMT -5 magiconz said:

Not a bad start but a couple of things that came to mind as I was reading.

1. A little more detail couldn't hurt. I'm all for short and sweet results and I'm certainly not expecting a novel but just a little bit more detail than "Wrestler X beat Wrestler Y in this manner". Again, the writing style is completely up to you but it's just something that kind of took me out of it while reading.

2. This is gonna seem like a weird complaint but I kinda feel like you have one too many belts. I'm of the opinion that if you're only running one show a month, you really only need two belts. A World Championship/Top Singles Championship and a Tag Team Championship. If you want to build up a Women's division, a Jr. Heavyweight division, or something of that nature, you can justify having a third belt. For a company that's just starting out and is only running a show a month, four belts is just too much IMO. A company should have a clearly defined mid-card before introducing a title for it.

Again, this is just meant to be some constructive criticism.

I was wondering if someone'd say anything about the writing style...

Hmm... I may not keep the Insanity championship much longer...

[thatponyguy]

Any plans I had for Jimmy Jacobs are screwed, as he was signed to a written contract by
Diamond Dust Wrestling.... Fuck you, DDW, fuck you swinging with a fucking cactus. I was gonna have Jacobs take the title off of Callihan...FUCK!

I signed Adam Cole and Kyle O'Reilly to open deals.

Company stats: As of the 7th of June, 2013 I am a Regional level promotion with 30% Public Image, 95% Risk Level, 10% Merchandising, 50% Production Values and 25% Advertising.

Top 5 Babyfaces:
1: Adam Cole
2: Jack Evans
3: PAC
4: Chris Hero
5: Tyler Black

Top 5 Heels:
1: Delirious
2: Paul London
3: Sami Callihan
4: Petey Williams
5: Chuck Taylor

Championship History:
BCPW championship (Image: 68):
1: Sami Callihan (Won: 27/01/13, Lost: ) (Current)

BCPW Insanity championship (Image: 53):
1: Zack Sabre Jr. (Won: 27/01/13, Lost: 28/04/13)
2: Delirious (Won: 28/04/13, Lost: ) (Current)

BCPW Lightweight championship (Image: 56):
1: TJ Perkins (Won: 27/01/13 Lost: 31/03/13)
2: Jigsaw (Won: 31/03/13, Lost: ) (Current)

BCPW Tag Team (Image: 51):
1: Incoherence (Won: 27/01/13, Lost: 28/04/13)
2: BLKOUT (BLK Jeez and Alex Colon) (Won: 28/04/13, 26/05/13)
3: Golden Lovers (Won: 26/05/13, Lost: ) (Current)

BCPW Show No Remorse card:Jack Evans vs. Sami Callihan(C) for the BCPW championship
Jigsaw(C) vs. Zack Sabre Jr. vs. Delirious(C) unification match for the BCPW Lightweight and Insanity championships
Chris Hero vs. Arik Cannon
TJ Perkins, Matt Cross and PAC vs. The Right
Tyler Black vs. Jon Moxley
Golden Lovers vs.
Paul London and vs. Danny Havoc and Chance Prophet