Wwe

[Brain Of J]

The punctuation and spelling (WWE not being capitalized, no spaces after periods) are a frustration, but could be overlooked if the show was interesting. But the complete and utter lack of detail doesn't do ANYTHING to draw interest. We don't have any idea of how the angles are progressing, or what they even are; who hates who, why, what the character motivation is, etc. All this is lost in your single-sentence write-ups. Nothing about "Jack Swagger beat Randy Orton" makes me care about either man or the angle.

Also, please do not make a new thread for every show. Use your original thread. The last thing we want are 600 individual posts for each and every episode.

Jed Shaffer
~Trying to be constructive. Hope it didn't come off abrasive. Food poisoning has a way of clouding the brain.

[thebestintheworld]

So we continue our diary

[Dan O'Mac]

I'm going to agree with Jed 100%. Without knowing the Who, What, When, Where, Why and How, this isn't a good read at all. You're telling a story, and to tell a good story, we need to know the details.

You don't need to write a novel per show like Jed and Comahan, but we need enough to know what's going on